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A/N: Hi, y'all. I just made my LJ yesterday, and I really want to become a writer (as do the rest of you, so we should get along fine), so I'd love some feedback. This post is the first chapter of my newest on-going story, and I hope you all will enjoy it. I love feedback -- even if it's critique -- because it makes me better, so prepare your bluntest -- I will be blunt back. ^^ I'll participate in challenges and stuff eventually -- when the newest is up, probably.

Title: The Glass Kingdom
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Humor, Young Adult, Fantasy
Rating: 15+
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Summary: Jazz is a quirky and practical girl. She has a minor talent in Seeing -- catching snatches of alternate realities and brief glimpses into the near future -- but this has never seriously impacted her conventional life. That is, until she finds out that she is the Seer -- a mythical being on whom the decisions of an entire world depends.
Disclaimer/Copyright: I do not own lines from Edgar Allen Poe's Alone, nor do I own the concept of Hakunamatata. However, I do own all of the characters and places, as they are products of my imagination, and any resemblance to real people or places is purely coincidental or used in a fictitious manner.
Excerpt/Link: It's the calm before the storm -- and like all the great storms before it, it was of the female persuasion.
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